Life in Pieces - ID# 557
Vernon Hills
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
It is Erik's (Zachary Paulsen) turn to get food for his apartment. On his way to the cafeteria, he gets into misadventures involving talking shark plushies, obnoxious customers, and turf-loving thugs.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/22 4:00 pm - Successful - Good shot variety and composition. Interesting location. Good music choice. Needs Work - Story was a little confusing, or at least was made confusing by being at IKEA. A regular house would have made more sense. The audio dubbing didn't quite work. Many shots were out of focus.
- 3/6 11:42 am - I simply don't understand what the film was about. The audio dubbing was a major distraction for me as a viewer and while there was some synchronization most of it was off enough to be distracting. In the future when shooting in a crowd consider getting permission and clearing the space so that you can cut out the chatter in the background. Also don't be afraid to hide lavalier mics on your actor so that you can pick them up better.
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