MMEA Fest

Dramatic Narrative.

3/16 8:08 pm - I really liked the beginning, it drew me in with the confusion and chaos your created with the words. I really didn’t know what she was smashing with the hammer, maybe I am naïve, but the bottom line is I spent a good amount of time trying to figure out what she was getting rid of. Your voice actor did a really great job telling her story, I think the music was very fitting to, however since it was original I would have loved if it was customized to just be guitar while the narration was going on, because I would be listening to the lyrics of the song, which were helping advance your story, but then suddenly in the middle of a line you would fade it down so I would here the narration. It would have given a little more synergy to the way the story was told instead of the two parts competing with each other. I’ll be honest, I still don’t know what she through in the fire, and without knowing that, I am guessing I don’t fully understand the gravity of the how your character is developing and what they are coming out of.
3/10 12:06 pm - Positives: Powerful topic, and the story depicts the internal struggle of an individual. Areas for improvement: Needs more variety in shot composition and camera movement. At times the music and Voiceover are not balanced well and voiceover gets a bit buried. Be sure to list music source to confirm confirm copyright-free or valid license to use.
3/9 7:44 pm - movement shots that are purposeful work, but some were a bit much

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