Proven - ID# 563

Bremen
Music Video

Entry Description

The music video is about a teenage girl who gets rejected by her dream school. She feels upset which causes her to experience dreams showing happy moments of her in hopes of one of her dreams becoming a reality.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/23 8:20 pm - Love that you used an original song. The falling transition (as she puts her head down) was done well. The dream sequence felt out of place. The clapping was off, and I would have liked it to feel like a real music venue, not just a green screened venue. You had good camera work and shot variety in the other sections that worked and were beautiful.
  • 3/6 6:34 am - Nice original work! I like how you move from applying to your dream school to imagining yourself on stage and seeing your future success! Nice job transitioning between you singing, acting in your room and then the dream sequence.
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