Lina's Frozen Treats - ID# 592

Maine East

Commercial

Entry Description

A commercial featuring the sweet treats of local Niles Dessert Shoppe, Lina's Frozen Treats.

Copyright Info

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DMyudUrFlQQ

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/23 1:37 pm - Lina’s Frozen Treats - Audio sounds “hot”-- feels documentary-like rather than commercial...
• 3/10 10:30 am - First of all, be proud of the fact that you made a commercial for a real business. That takes a LOT of effort. CAMERA: excellent camera work, really showing off the business and their products. LIGHTING: very evenly lit, good exposure to match the environment AUDIO: the audio from the owner/manager person was distorted, which really kills the message. This is the kind of problem you just can't fix in post; you should have re-recorded the video, or done a voice over and just scrapped the interview with the owner. EDITING: your pace was just right for a commercial of this length. Nice flow going between shots of the place, the people, and the products.

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