To Fall in Love and Break it Off - ID# 600

Downers Grove North

Seven Day Challenge

Entry Description

Video Featuring Original Music

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Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: You have a good core story here and I like that you put it into a song and made a music video of sorts for this challenge. You had a lot of inventive use of camera work throughout. You tried doing some really ambitious camera moves and shots for a project in such a short amount of time.

Improvements: I admire the ambition with the camera work but there are a lot of technical aspects that fall through. Focus is bad at times and sometimes shots are underexposed. Unfortunately the vocals on the song aren't great. I understand it is a short time to work on a song but with a music video like this the song and the vocals need to be spot on and they are bit rough at points.

Judge 2

Positives: 3:30 that simple facial twitch says alot 1:40 nice low light shot with bokeh

Improvements: 4:15 I like the beginning and ending shots a lot even though they are rough. I still feel that we're not seeing the entire picture, that it was shot with a wider lens and somehow mistakenly cropped in the edit. Best wishes in all future endeavors. #makemovieshappen

Judge 3

Positives: I really like the concept of this film and think it is a good way to tell the story of these two. Also good job with the camera work on the project. There are times that some of the shots are blurry, but for the most part you do a good job on this. Solid job on the matching the sync for the talent.

Improvements: Make sure to check the focus it is one of the distractions of the project. Watch the audio with the wind because it takes away from the seriousness of the scene.

Judge 4

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