This is a how to / demonstration video for making butter beer, made famous by the Harry Potter series.
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Positives: Your project has an elegant look and feel. The colors are very rich and support the theme of your project. Your coverage of the events in your project was impressive. You use interesting angles and had enough shots to allow for an effective edit.
Improvements: Make sure that you clean up all of the crumbs and liquid spills. Most of your is extremely clean. As a result, small details like that become really apparent. (see approx. 00:58 - 01:10)
Positives: The lighting for this video was consistent and appropriately conveyed the tone of the piece. The references to Harry Potter throughout was a nice addition.
Improvements: The editing of this piece could have used some improvement. The pace for a cooking video is critical and this piece felt slow. The footage could have been more diverse with creative and unique angles and movements. Also, graphics throughout the piece, specifically while listing the necessary ingredients, could have helped strengthen the overall step-by-step process.
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