MMEA Fest

Hawks fly high and soar with pride, we're swift, intensely focused, and powerful creatures. Intelligent, wise, and proud. It's good to be a HAWK!

https://youtu.be/n4tK7LYFxI0

4/20 11:28 am - Strengths: 1. Your piece provides glimpses of the exciting things occurring in your school. You also are providing a sense of your school's personality. 2. Some of your camera movements are quite smooth, I like how you vary the direction of these movements (horizontal and vertical movements). Areas on which to work: 1. You have a number of shots depicting empty spaces and staff members sitting at their desks. Consider what these shots would have accomplished if we had seen these spaces in use and these staff members in action. 2. Continue to work on pacing - look for shots that last too long (shots of staff members) and shots that do not last long enough (dance team on gym floor). 3. Don't be afraid to include natural audio in some instances. The sounds associated with these events can add to the excitement.
3/4 11:18 am - I really liked how the video was cut too the music. Some great footage that had smooth movements. Great variety of shots.
3/2 1:42 pm - Great video showcasing a lot of what goes on at your school. Make sure to use a tripod as some of your videos were shaky. Great use of transitions and effects matching your music!

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