MMEA Fest

Three teenagers are faced in an anxiety-provoking situation. Promotes a nonprofit organization.

Written permission from De Wolfe Music to use music.

4/23 9:12 am - This PSA has an important message and a clear call to action. I like the music and text you have selected for setting the tone. The use of the audio for the clock is also great for creating that "anxious feeling." I would have loved to have heard more examples like this! I also wanted to see more of a variety of "anxious scenarios." You had someone in class, in a car, and the girl at the table. I wasn't really sure what was making that last 2 students anxious. I think you needed to be a bit more specific in what was going on in your scenes, rather than just relying on your actors to convey emotions. For example, could you film a student at a basketball game feeling anxious to be called in to play? Be specific in these scenarios and it will help to take this project a step further!
3/7 3:56 pm - Good, clear story. Music and sfx really fit well. I can almost feel the anxiety. I'm not a fan of lots of text, but you did it well at the end. Clear, short, and on screen long enough. One thing I wasn't sure about: the girl before the text. Is she anxious or is it the boy looking at her and can't focus on what he is doing?

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