Bulldog Football - ID# 99

Riverside Brookfield

School Promotion

Entry Description

A school promotional piece showcasing the Riverside Brookfield High school Football program.

Copyright Info

https://www.audioblocks.com/

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 4:03 pm - Your piece contains a number of excellent action shots taken from several different games. Because these shots come from different locations around the field, no two shots look the same. Also, your camera operator follows that action quite well. I like the creative camera position behind the fence and the moving shot along the numbers on the field. How else might you have framed this piece? The intro. and conclusion help explain the "glitches" that randomly appear in the montage, but what purpose they serve. While you use this effect consistently, it can become a distraction. You do include a shot of the crowd, but this is the only non football related shot that hints at the fan experience. Would a few more shots like this help communicate the level of entertainment the team provides its fans?
• 3/5 2:47 pm - Creative concept. Loved the shots of the numbers on the field. Some great footage. Great job!
• 3/5 1:28 pm - Great editing by adding some of the cool graphics. This definitely added some excitement to the video. Great gameplay footage as well, you captured some great shots. I liked the ending where your announcers even mention the theme of your video. Nicely done with that.

Judge 1

Positives: The distortion element gave a unique perspective and held viewer interest GREAT camera work from the sidelines!

Improvements: The distortion element was effective in getting viewer attention but was uncertain of how the convenience was used to create a story... space invaders? rival mascot causing the disturbance? dream? Could have been flushed out more. The story could have been further developed

Judge 2

Positives: I like the use of the glitch effect, but as I mention below it might have been used too much and become a distraction. I do like the varation of the shots that you use during this video, as well as the opening shots of the captains and the fencing. Great job showing the action of the game.

Improvements: Overall I like the video, but I think that you use too long to get the action going, 12 seconds is a lot to use. While the glitch effect can be effective there are a couple of times that it is a little jarring like at 1:02 for the play at the goal line. I think the glitch there takes away from the action and the great play to make the stop. I was not a huge fan of the ending, but I do see how it helps to tell the story. Hd you set up the use of the annoucners prior to this then I coud see it working, but you just put them at the end.

Judge 3

Positives: Your video looks great for being shot at night. I love that you used some ambient environment shots, sidelines, crowd and play shots. great use of broll. I liked that you put an artistic spin on the sizzle. The edit is very cool and you did a great job on flow.

Improvements: I got a little confused at the restarting graphics at the beginning (they were cool but your video is so strong at :12 I would get into it right there and put a clear call to action for the viewer to attend games at the end (I do appreciate the idea you were going for though) I liked the use of your transition but it got a little heavy in the back half of the video and started to distract me. I would tighten this up to be a little shorter and use the effect sparingly! And if you use nat sound I'd use it throughout or once your introduce it leave it in for rest of piece!

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