Aunt Joanne - ID# 101

Oak Forest

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Quirky free spirit Aunt Joanne comes to visit her sister and nephew. Unfortunately, they are not as enthusiastic about her new business idea as she'd anticipated. *Royalty free music from Bensound.com- with my school's license.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/29 1:34 pm - Some great use of audio and nice jokes, especially the fabric swatch. Love the bit with the fabric but needs more of an ending rather than that line, feels like it ended abruptly.
• 4/27 10:32 am - Successful - Good editing. Good acting. Needs Work - Not much story.
• 2/22 12:40 pm - Funny concept with a lot or room to explore creatively. I would suggest adding variety to your shots, depth of field, camera movement.

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