Spot Feature: Chicago Industrial Fasteners - ID# 136

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Short spot feature on Chicago Industrial Fasteners helps businesses create the fasteners they need for their projects.

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• 4/28 10:11 am - Really cool story, very interesting, but I want more information. How are the fasteners made, are they made in house? And tell me about the dogs. You're off to a good start. Regarding the interview, eye-level is key to a good interview. You're off to a great start, keep working at it!
• 3/28 9:00 pm - “I went down to…” - don’t need to say that because you’re actually at that place of business. And honestly, if the story is about that, we know that you went there so there’s no need to tell the viewer that. First interview - he is looking up at the person doing the interview. When interviewing, if your interviewee sits, you should sit too so they are looking straight at you - not up at you or down at you. “All with the help of their company dogs” - How do the dogs help the company? In news packages, you want to have a mix of wide, medium, and tight shots. You had quite a few medium and tight shots, but need more wide shots - a wide shot of the business at the beginning to establish where you are (then can go to the tighter shot of the door). Then inside, a wide shot of the warehouse or the office area - then go to tighter shots.

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