Balloon Business - ID# 131
Lake Forest
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Balloon Business created by Zion Dawkins Copyright free music: Spitfire by Lance Conrad
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/29 1:30 pm - Unfortunately DQ'd for time. However, great story and love what you did with the work from home. Great b-roll, love the interview subject, but could use some more interviews to shape it out a bit more. Keep at it, you're off to a good start, just be sure to know the limits when it comes to film festivals.
- 3/28 9:00 pm - Story is over the time limit for this category. Good story idea. Some of the clips were quick and didn’t allow views adequate time to fully take it in. Good background info on why she started her business. After the last SOT, you can see her wave as the video dissolves to the b-roll shot. Would do a cut here instead to avoid that. Good information at the end to show viewers where to find her business.
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