How to Make Stuffed Mushrooms - ID# 14
Morton East
Demonstration
Entry Description
This is a video on how to make stuffed mushrooms. Music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vN0og1XdXSQ&ab_channel=Team143-Topic
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/19 7:43 pm - POSITIVES: Great opening sequence, with interesting fonts. Good over the shoulder shot! Great use of a glass bowl to show the mixing through the side! Nice low-flat shot for the stuffing. Nice beauty shots at the end! SUGGESTIONS: Ingredients seem rushed... add to a list to avoid this. Stirring in the pan is a bit long--don't need to show ALL of it... edit.
Judge 1
Positives: Good camera shots and angles. Good clear story line told by visuals. Good use of text graphics. Animation good addition.
Improvements: Music too loud for narration. She is hard to understand. Too much time spent on camera watching over cook.
Judge 2
Positives: You have a great variety of shots in this video which makes it more interesting to watch. You describe the process clearly once you begin the cooking, and that makes this video run smoothly. I think that your use of stop motion is creative and a fun way to move the dishes. The lighting on this video is well done and is not distracting—great job on this video.
Improvements: I wish you would have narrated the portion with the ingredients; it is helpful if I am trying to make it while the video is playing. Watch the level of the music, so it does not overpower your voice. You do not have to grease the whole pan for the video. If you say it, that is good for the viewer. The time-lapse of that is not needed. You do the time-lapse a few times; it is alright to make and edit; this will also speed up your video.
Judge 3
Positives: This was edited very well and follows the conventions of cooking videos. The stop motion editing while filling the mushrooms on the tray was well done and effective. Very well done overall.
Improvements: The font for the instructions was nice looking, but too serify to be effective for instructions. The announcers audio was a little too low for the level of the background music.
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