Spot Feature: Student’s Hobby Sparks Many Melodies - ID# 142
Southland College Prep
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A feature story about one student that overcame many obstacles in his life, through the power of music.
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- 4/28 9:59 am - Great storytelling, awesome interviews and b-roll, wonderful music bed, the beginning felt a bit cheesy with the crumpled paper but that’s outside of your control. Overall, nice work!
- 3/28 9:01 pm - The natural audio at the beginning when talking about what he plays was too loud. It should never overpower your VO or SOT. The father was looking up at the camera during the interview. When interviewing, if your interviewee sits, you should sit too so they are looking straight at you - not up at you or down at you. Don’t let the enthusiasm of your VO drop at the end - you want to keep that energy up in your VO for the entire story. Great topic for the story and was told well.
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