A live performance excerpt of the original song "Prove Me Wrong" by Tyler Banis.
Positives: Nice use of cameras! Really liked that you had a camera focused on the keys of the piano, then also had different shots of him playing, singing and the piano. The transitions between the cameras were on point as well and worked well with the music and story he was telling.
Improvements: Make sure you don't use too many pans. I know you have to get creative with your shots, but don't use pan after pan. Zoom in as close as you can on his face, or even singing into the mic. You could even try zooming in farther on the keys.
Positives: Nice dissolves to the musician playing the piano. Nice use of interesting pans and camera angles.
Improvements: The singer's voice felt a bit louder than the piano -- felt hard for me to adjust my volume to get it right. I know it is difficult to mix music. Could have used a nice wide shot to see the whole piano and him sitting there -- I realize it can be tricky depending on how much gear you have.
Positives: Audio mix and color mix on cameras was very good! I liked the detailed shots, picking up the hands and the inside of the piano. You chose nice slow fade transitions between cameras. Overall, great job!
Improvements: Don't overdue the detailed shots as the singer should still be the main focus of the video. I would never start a camera shot down by his butt and move up to his face. Start from is head off camera (Bottom left since he was facing to the right) and drop in with a slow fade and rack in. (Racking in means to start out of focus and as subject comes into frame so does the focus)
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