Walk to School - ID# 163

Homewood-Flossmoor

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

A simple walk to school goes terribly wrong when a high school teen discovers a mysterious tunnel.

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• 4/29 1:37 pm - Fun emotions between the actor and the tunnel and some great close-up reaction shots. Those were definitely the most engaging parts. But it was hard to understand the conflict to begin with and so the punchline falls flat.
• 4/27 10:11 am - Successful - Very cool location and interesting concept. Good use of music. Needs Work - The story was confusing and incomplete. The joke didn't really work because we didn't really understand anything about the tunnel or why he was approaching it.
• 2/22 11:41 am - Good use of music to build suspense. Unless the viewer reads the videos title you the viewer really has no idea what is going on in the video and where the subject is trying to get to. One suggestion would be to add more camera angles for example a view from inside the tunnel looking at the boy.

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