Upper Body Workout - ID# 179

Metea Valley

Demonstration

Entry Description

A demonstration of a simple, yet highly effective upper body workout, focusing on form and technique, as well as productivity. OCTILARY courtesy of YouTube Music Library

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Recent Teacher Comments

Judge 1

Positives: Good clear script of the processes. Good use of "out of focus" video with graphic texts. Good clear camera work that captures action well. Good music selection and mix.

Improvements: Narrator looses some energy at end of sentence and ends up cutting off last bit of words. Some camera shots could be closer to capture more.

Judge 2

Positives: I like the variety of shots that you use during this video. When you use this many shots, it helps to move the video and keep the viewer engaged. Great job with the line showing the extension. This is a perfect use of this technique—good job with the audio and lighting. I think you could have added some of the room's natural sounds to add even more depth to the video.

Improvements: It is important to avoid shakey videos, especially at the start. Make sure that you are using a tripod or a stabilizing device. When using a title graphic, work on smoothing out the in and out points of it to be more seamless and less jarring to the viewer. When showing the process, show the viewer what you mean by certain movements. When you talk about the wrist potion for the curl, show them what you mean through the video.

Judge 3

Positives: Well shot and demonstrated.. Good choice of font for the transitions with the blurred background. Good use of graphics overall in the demonstrations. Glad that it wasn't the same person demonstrating the whole time--variety is good. Glad there were other people in the background, too, because it made this more alive and realistic.

Improvements: The narrator seemed a little rushed at times, which takes away from him sounding more natural. But well done overall.

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