Glenbrook South 2020 Fall Fest - ID# 19

Hillcrest

School Promotion

Entry Description

This school promotion features the Glenbrook South student council as they highlight information regarding the Fall Festival that occurred socially distanced in the Fall of 2020. Permission to use music from Dewolfe Music.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 6:27 am - Great job! The visuals look clean and clear, and I love the way you have met distancing guidelines but have made it seem like a real group effort. The performers do a really good job with the reading, and the music is a nice, subtle choice.
• 3/10 8:44 am - Fun idea! Additional graphics would have helped with dates. The composition looked good. The color was perfect. Nice job!

Judge 1

Positives: The use of the pumpkin throw did two things, it was a clever way to transition, highlighted that this was a fall event and showed social distancing. You can see the students were having fun giving out this information. Having the closed caption and the slides of the movies helped. It did fortified the message. Visuals gives the information in a way to connect to the viewer in both instances.

Improvements: Some of the students could slow down with their speech, yes, the pumpkins throw gave it pace. It's a minor one and it was such an upbeat video. One of the things that was so great about using the pumpkin throw was emphasizing social distancing. The final frame of everyone together, yes there were masks, totally showed no social distancing. I'm sure you wanted to get the whole group and have something normal. This was a bit of a contradiction.

Judge 2

Positives: enjoyed the motif of the passing of the pumpkin and puns lighting/backgrounds of front of school presented well

Improvements: A bit repetitive. Could have gotten some comedy/broken it up with a change up in the formula of throwing the pumpkin... i.e. - the pumpkin changed into a bowling ball, grape, etc... Change of venue could have helped hold interest longer

Judge 3

Positives: This is a very creative project. I love the pumpkin toss. The editing on that is perfect. Your project held my interest and curiosity.

Improvements: Here are a couple of things that may help to make this even better. Think about attire. Try to get everyone to wear Glenbrook South t-shirts. Most of your main speakers did. (Although there were two that didn't.) It would be really cool to see everyone wearing a Glenbrook South t-shirt in the larger group at the end.

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