Sweater Song Music Video - ID# 196
Franklin High School
Music Video
Entry Description
An unofficial music video for Phoneboy's Sweater Song created in 24 hours by the crew of Lightning Movies for the 28th annual MMEA festival.
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- 4/30 9:55 am - I thought that this was funny, but the story felt a little off to me. I think the group of people had some good chemistry, though. The tracking shot outside was fun to me, but have it all come together a little bit more.
- 3/12 4:02 pm - Editing flow matches song, good. Clean medium and close up shots. Cute chemistry, funny drip want. Funny fall, good revolving tracking shot outside, punk song matching the punk video, really enoyed this, pan down back inside with the boards made more sense, mway to mix static and handheld shots, cool sparkler shot, Very good casting (the most important part), metaphysics of mother nature was cool as well as the sparkler bomb and POV shot, well done, loved the after effects explosion and friend hug to end, very cute Don't need to pan down in bathroom but other than that you knew what feel you were going for and executed it, nicely done
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