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Positives: Nice job with the quick cut edits Good use of music Believable acting
Improvements: The story was a little clunky - it might have worked better if the student started out doing his homework and gotten distracted, vs. setting the reminder and them immediately goofing off until 11 PM. The story wouldn't be especially interesting to other people - consider doing something that viewers will be motivated to watch. Is there a lesson to be learned about procrastination, or not paying attention to details?
Positives: Really upbeat and fun mix of distractions from the essay. Great editing overall. The pacing is perfect. The music compliments the events of the film very nicely.
Improvements: 1 nitpick - that I'm sure you're aware of, it was still light outside at 10:00 PM This was a ton of fun. Great work!
Positives: It's funny because it's true--easy to identify with yet still didn't see the ending coming. Nice job.
Improvements: Well edited--a lot going on here, but you made it work
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