Best Pre-Workout on the Market - ID# 198

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Ad for Pre-Kaged sport or performance workout.

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Recent Teacher Comments

  • 4/29 8:15 pm - I think this was a little too long. Make it thirty seconds and have the voiceover come in quicker. Find some different angles and close-ups for your shots and use some lighting to give it a different feel.
  • 2/25 1:43 pm - Overall the commercial lacks a coherent story. You need to work on dramatic lighting for workout videos. Some of the most cinematic commercials are done in the gym setting. Jump on YouTube and check out a couple examples of some commercials for either a workout supplement or a workout equipment and you'll see. Work on the voice over as well. Voice overs in commercials should be flawless
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