MMEA Fest

Sit Straighter - ID# 214

Mundelein

Public Service Announcement

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Recent Teacher Comments

4/30 10:31 am - Good concept. Excellent use of varied elements: live action, animation, text, etc.
4/7 5:57 pm - Good pacing, good audio, good graphics -- definitely made me sit up straight! Effective!
3/9 3:52 pm - Nice, well done! Really effective video. Editing was well done, well-paced, audio at good levels, graphics looked great.

Judge 1

Positives: Well done. Good script and camera shots that support message. Narrator did a great job.

Improvements: Might have used a few more shots of bad vs good posture instead of just one.

Judge 2

Positives: The animated graphics are eye catching. Telling the story through graphics is a nice touch.

Improvements: More shots of a person could help personalize the PSA. Video shots to replace the stills could help the piece.

Judge 3

Positives: Overall, this video was very strong. The message was clear and unique and covers a topic that is important but often overlooked. The voice-over was very strong and conveyed emotion and was very direct with the message. Visually, the graphics really took this message to the next level. The character movement and animated graphics were visually pleasing and super cute.

Improvements: There were a couple of grammatical points to be aware of in the voice-over including the correct pronunciation of the word "ergonomic". The non-graphic elements of this piece could have been stronger. For example, not having still photos with a zoom at the start of the video.

Judge 4

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