Student Voice Committee - ID# 216

Mundelein

School Promotion

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/22 6:40 am - Nice, clear audio, and your speaker does a good job maintaining and energetic and interesting tone and pace. The graphics are clean and easy to read, but I would have the instagram name/address on a slide as the speaker says it to avoid any possible confusion about it. The music fits without being distracting.

Judge 1

Positives: The message was to the point and supplied with good informational graphics. You were able to explain what, where and who would be involved. The editing was excellent using the slides to emphasize what the narration was saying.

Improvements: The music bed volume was too loud for the narration. It was louder than the narrator and that may drown out the message. The last slide/graphic was not clear and too dark/ maybe use that area to give more information.

Judge 2

Positives: graphics supported the script well vocal narrative was well rehearsed and engaging

Improvements: the purpose was to get someone to go to complete the survey but the graphic was small in the final moment of the video... would make that larger lacked a personal touch with a live person that would have helped get more students to participate

Judge 3

Positives: Very nice graphical presentation. The voice-over read was excellent. The speaker was articulate and energetic. Each page layout was well balanced.

Improvements: Consider giving just a little more specific information on the topics being addresses. Is this an interactive event or is this something that the audience would watch and then discuss afterwards? The opening animation og "Hey Mustangs" works great. The written words were in sync with the spoken words. It would be very effective to do that type of animation throughout the project. The text at about 0:18 is too close to the top and bottom of the frame. Try to keep text away from the outside edge of the frame. For video going to the internet only text should use the inner 90% of the frame.

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