4/28 10:08 am - There was an awkward start but awesome story overall. Really good sound too. Could use some more interviews to round this out a bit and provide a bit more of a news package structure. Finally, be sure to provide citation of all footage not filmed by the producer.
3/28 9:04 pm - Jump cut at :28 - very slight, but it’s there. When using b-roll that you did not shoot, you need to courtesy it. Use the natural audio from the sports footage in your story.