One of the acts from the Glenbrook South variety show. This act is starring our singer dancer group performing, "Brand New Day".
Positives: The sound for a large performance like that was clear enough to understand which can be tough. Also, I thought you changed over to the different cameras at the correct time.
Improvements: I would have liked to see an actor or actress's face up close. All the shots were wide and it was hard to be able to see the expression which helps tell the story. With multiple different cameras, I would make sure to have couple close shots. Also, don't be afraid to get out of your comfort zone with the camera. Since you have a few cameras to work from, go ahead and try zooming in and out different times or even do a pan.
Positives: This was really well done! I have watched many performances like this over the years, and so often it is hard to see the performers, difficult to figure out who is singing, etc. Nice job capturing the right people at the right time -- I could clearly determine who was singing the solo parts. Nice use of camera angles -- I was able to get the perspective of the whole stage, and then also enjoy some more intimate shots of the performers. Nice audio mixing -- can be hard with live music, but this was done well.
Improvements: Would have loved one more camera on the other side of the stage, but I get that resources can be limited! Was good use of what you had. A few tighter shots mixed in would have been nice -- a closer look at a specific dancer, for example.
Positives: The opening wide shot with a slow push was a perfect way to start. The color matching from camera to camera was very good. The audio mix was pretty good as well.
Improvements: I would have liked to have seen more tight shot (Waist to head). I would have started on the exact same shot that you chose but just has the talent was about to start singing I would have gone to a tight shot. Try to time the cuts to go along with the music, which means you really have to know the show.
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