Radon The Silent Killer - ID# 236

York

Public Service Announcement

Entry Description

A PSA about the dangers of Radon in the basements of Illinois home

Copyright Info

Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/30 10:31 am - Good concept, creative shooting. Effective. Style serves message and call to action
• 4/7 5:59 pm - Super creative! Effective use of lighting. Good audio. Pacing maybe a bit too quick. Message was clear.
• 3/9 3:54 pm - Really creative! Loved the use of lighting and the fog machine to create the evil radon. A really effective way to get the message across, well done!

Judge 1

Positives: Good dramatic presentation of topic. Love the first person narrative. Good camera shots and lighting.

Improvements: Narrator needed to speak a bit slower and with more drama.

Judge 2

Positives: The dramatic lighting and smoke work extremely well. The piece is shot like an 80's horror film and it works. The dramatic look is exactly what this piece called for. Bravo!

Improvements: The narration is written well but it seemed rushed when read. More time could have been taken to create the narration as dramatic as the images. The cinematography has a but of shaky shots and could have been improved with some type of slider.

Judge 3

Positives: The narration for this piece was clear and direct along with very informative. The call to action at the end was also strong.

Improvements: The fog effect was a great visual touch but it may come off as confusing since viewers may assume that radon is visible in that way when it is not. The voice-over could have used more emotion.

Judge 4

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