4/30 10:30 am - Interesting concept, but what are you advocating? Unclear call to action. Not enough original filming - looks like lots of stock footage
4/7 5:54 pm - The "it's not March anymore" was a little confusing. Stop dreaming and start doing...(message unclear when the visual was a person taking off mask)? The shots were nicely done, good composition, would have loved to see a bit more of your own videography, but the editing/compiling is good!