9/11 Ceremony - ID# 274

South Elgin

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This news story looks back on the 2020 ceremony commemorating the 9/11 tragedy, and how changes were made because of the pandemic.

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• 4/28 10:11 am - Nice narration and anchor spots. Great b-roll, but everything was pretty wide shot, let’s get closer. The walking over the anchor was a bit hard to follow so steady shots and varying your shots will help a lot. Keep up the good work!
• 3/28 9:08 pm - Don’t start your VO as soon as your video starts at the beginning. Start it about 1-2 seconds into the video. It’s hard and I don’t know what you were using to shoot video, but hold your camera as steady as possible. Whenever possible, use a tripod. Good use of a standup in the middle of your story. The VO that followed your standup was upcut - careful where you place your edits so that you’re not cutting off the first consonant of a word. Same happened at 1:14 with the SOT. Make sure your VO is in stereo so it’s not heard just from one speaker.

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