Glamping - ID# 289

Hillcrest

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Will and Julia are anything but your average teens. Their friends Stacy and Stephen challenge them to survive a night in the woods. With their rich, wealth, and glamor, what could go wrong? Dewolfe music

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/29 1:35 pm - Great concept but could use some more conflict to add to the humor of the situation. Moved really fast so the premise was a bit hard to understand without reading the description. Nice editing and filming work!
• 4/27 11:13 am - Successful - Good story structure and interesting premise with a good ending. Nice looking shots. Needs Work - Some of the camera focus is off at times. Overall the humor could have been pushed a little more - like putting them in more funny camping situations that they weren't ready for. This feels too short for what could have been a more fleshed out story.
• 2/22 1:15 pm - The video quality is great. The audio sounds a little off. I really like the smooth shot following the actors at the 40 second mark. Switch up the camera angle more during the montage of playing games until the end. The subjects are framed the same way throughout. For example a close up of them moving a monopoly piece.Maybe show what the selfie photos look like. Definitely need more of a variety of shots.

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