4/29 2:26 pm - This definitely felt more like a how-to/demonstration versus a commercial. I thought what you had was good; the voice over was fine, the simple instructions were clear and easy to understand, and the music fit well. Adding in some other visuals would have enhanced it for your audience.
2/25 11:20 am - A simple commercial that outlines all the relevant information that is needed. Elrod production of the commercial is fairly simple but it is clean. I think the music choice is strong as it is upbeat and happy. Maybe you can spend a little bit more time on highlighting a few of the programs specifically that are on the station at some point.