Cooking with Class - ID# 303

South Elgin

Comedic Narrative

Entry Description

Cooking with Class is a comedic cooking show where the host attempts to bake a vanilla cake along with home-made icing, however, he continues to mess up through out the process. This entry contains 3 excerpts from the program.

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• 4/29 1:39 pm - Some nice shots and great audio work with the narrator but I would have loved to hear the food sounds. A lot of emphasis on the narrator telling jokes, which is hard because the focus is on the cake. There's room here for improvement, especially since the actor is so likable, but we need to push in further to really get to know him and respond to his jokes. Close-up's, reaction shots of the food, maybe some cut-aways, would help a lot. Keep at it, you're on the right track!
• 4/27 11:05 am - Successful - Good acting. Good camera compositions. Needs Work - This has a pretty random structure to it, without much going on. It might be interesting to tell a story throughout the segments that builds towards something.
• 2/22 1:11 pm - One suggestion would be to use more natural sound. Get the mic nice and close to capture the eggs exploding, the mashing off the food etc. "I miss my grandma, but they will find her eventually.." Dark but funny.

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