Advanced Bionics - ID# 319

Oak Park River Forest

Commercial

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Sound is a necessity...

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/29 8:08 pm - Love the idea, but agree that maybe having him put in the bionics sooner would keep your audience engaged a little bit more. Some of the shots could have been framed a little tighter. Make it a 30 second commercial!
• 2/25 1:36 pm - I like the concept of the commercial, but I do think the narrative drags out far too long. The boy can put the headset on much earlier in the commercial to have the same effect on the viewer. I think some information about the product or the company will be necessary and should be added to the video in the second half. Also, I would leave out music music in the background when you put the hearing aids on.

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