Friedstir - ID# 325
Oak Park River Forest
Demonstration
Entry Description
A zoom-made homemade cooking tutorial
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- 4/19 7:06 pm - POSITIVES: Low-flat angle at the countertop works well, but is overused. SUGGESTIONS: Needs an engaging opening, rather than diving into the recipe. The voiceover doesn't always match up with the visuals. More shot variety would make it more interesting. Full screen cuts to a partial screen-- vertical phone video shouldn't be mixed in. This looks like a video of a video being played on a tablet... you should submit the original export.
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