Pin Busters - ID# 327
Oak Park River Forest
Commercial
Entry Description
This is a commercial for a fictional bowling alley called Pin Busters
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/29 7:21 pm - I think that you were going for funny, but it just fell quite short for me. The censored cursing was out of place, and the graphics were not of a quality that worked. It was hard to hear, and the sound of the bowling balls was distracting.
- 2/25 12:20 pm - I think the concept of a funny bowling alley commercial is a good one. The store you tell is clear, but many of the production errors are distracting from the story. Reevaluate the overall mix of audio and be aware of your surroundings when you're shooting. It takes some really nice equipment and I really thoughtful setup to record live sound in a bowling alley. I think the graphics are subpar and I also think that the person cursing midway through it's not funny and it's distracting from the overall story of the commercial
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