iPhone 12 Pro Max - ID# 328

Bremen

Commercial

Entry Description

All images and music in the commercial, were filmed, created in blender, or copyright free.

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 4/29 2:17 pm - Your graphic sims were done very well. I thought it actually could have been a 30 second commercial and it still would have given the same wow factor, but with less talking. Very nice work, looks amazing!
• 2/25 11:12 am - There's some absolutely fantastic Graphics being used in this commercial. I don't know that the voice over quality fits the visual quality so I would work on cleaning that up. Overall a fantastic commercial that looks professional but sounds a little amateur

Judge 1

Positives: I nearly thought this was an apple commercial! The visuals were excellent and the editing on par with professional commercials in terms of pace, flow and story.

Improvements: I deducted a few points because the story was wordy. The sound mix was what told me this was not an actual apple commercial. Soundtrack and composition were not bad but the recording itself might have been better.

Judge 2

Positives: The phone graphics are well done The siri voice interacting with the voice over and supers worked really nicely

Improvements: The music didn't marry well with the voice over - they compete with one another for viewer's attention The echo on the voice over is not necessary to convey the idea, and cheapens the spot, which ultimately reflects on the product

Judge 3

Positives: Some interesting moments here; the Siri thing is funny and the editing keeps the pace moving along. Music editing is good.

Improvements: voice-over is a little muddy and hard to understand at points. Not really clear how much of this footage was shot and how much was appropriated from elsewhere, so hard to evaluate shooting or lighting skills.

Judge 4

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