SAGA club - ID# 4

Glenbrook South

Natural Audio News Package

Entry Description

GTV reporter Sydney Hostasa speaks to a transgender teenager who finds comfort in a club at school

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Recent Teacher Comments

• 3/28 8:49 pm - This category does not allow music to be in it and there is a background music bed in this story. The audio transitions can be heard. Depending on what program you’re using to edit with, soften the audio edits in your story so you can’t hear the audio cuts. Powerful story. Use the natural audio from the b-roll to help tell this story - that is what this category is all about. Telling the story with the sound bytes and with the natural audio.
• 3/18 8:02 am - This was a powerful story and I like the variety of photos and videos incorporated. The interview shot seems to be filmed at a lower angle than needed. Make sure that the camera is at eye line with the interviewee. Interview audio is also a little fuzzy. This category also does not allow background music. This might fit better in the documentary category.
• 3/2 12:38 pm - ***I believe this may be in the wrong category. Natural audio category does not use music or any background sounds OTHER than what naturally comes from the interviews and the footage. This obviously has a music soundtrack being used and thus does not fit in the category or Natural Audio News Package. This would be just a News Package. (A compelling story- nice job getting the interview and piecing it together.)

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