The Boy and the Wizard - ID# 43
Lake Forest
Comedic Narrative
Entry Description
Norman is cursed to cry forever after rejecting his friend Magus.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/29 1:37 pm - Some audio issues but nice over the shoulder shot in the beginning. Interesting story but kind of hard to understand with the curse and the crying. Keep at it!
- 4/27 11:35 am - Successful - A funny and creative concept. Some interesting shots. Needs Work - Some shots were out of focus. Audio quality was not great. Acting performances needed a few more takes to get it right. The runtime was too long - this could probably have been a lot shorter with some editing and story adjustments.
- 2/22 1:31 pm - Good use of a variety of shots in the beginning. Why dies the audio change dramatically from the steps to when they are walking away from each other? The story is confusing and hard to follow.
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