Clif Bar Commercial - ID# 64
Wheaton North
Commercial
Entry Description
Commercial for Clif Bars
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/29 8:29 pm - Variety would have been great, adding in some close-ups, adding in some mediums, seeing the person running, etc. Adding more a story to it. Why is the cliff bar just sitting there? Add in some reasons for why things are where they are.
- 2/25 1:51 pm - I like the tagline for the commercial and I think you've done a good job outdoors and controlling both the audio and the lighting. So I think there is a opportunity for more variety of shots in this production.
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