A documentary honing in on the tremendous impact art has on lives. This documentary features the artist Peggy Kullman, her son, Wayne Kullman, as well as one of Peggy's buyers, Jeanne Dale. This story trails the development of Peggy Kullmans art, which reflects on her own life as well as her families. Permission to use music from De Wolfe Music.
Positives: The back and forth between Peggy and Wayne is well done. It really captures the story from two related perspectives and the mother / son relationship. Good camera work. The close-ups and diversity of shots helps to keep the story moving forward and captures the characters.
Improvements: The framing is compelling and unique. When focusing on the art, it might be ideal if the entire piece was included in the frame.
Positives: It was an interesting choice to have the art showcased outside in the environment that seems to have inspired the artist. It was nice to here from someone who purchased her art and why.
Improvements: So closer shots of the individual art pieces would have been nice to see. It would have allow the audience to truly examine and appreciate her work. Especiall the piece as she is reading the accompanying poem.
Positives: Super Interesting subject matter. Nice use of natural light and footage. Good camera work. Thought the track of music captured the right tone.
Improvements: My biggest piece of feedback has to do with (potentially) another way of doing this story. Around 4:11 she talks about working with 6 other women every other Thursday. Just imagine for a moment starting your piece at that studio with all of the women creating art together! They could all be interviewed about how that communal experience effects them positively from a personal and artistic stand point. Tackling the story from that way may have a more inspirational impact for the viewer,
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