McDonalds Commercial - ID# 80

Lake Forest
Commercial

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A commercial for McDonalds music- Classic Rock Nikolai Heidias

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  • 4/29 2:47 pm - I loved your enthusiasm in the car, I appreciated the McDonalds chant. When filming food you want to actually take time to make sure it's looking its best: crisp fries, no grease on the box, etc. That way it will be more inviting to your audience. The shots in the car had an over-exposed background, so keep an eye on that when you're filming in or near the outdoors.
  • 2/25 11:28 am - The overall aesthetic does not feel like a commercial for McDonald's. Product as well. Many of the shots are a little over-exposed and you need to work with finding a right exposure and using Whiting to make sure that the composition is balanced.
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