Molly's Cupcakes - ID# 100
Neuqua Valley
Commercial
Entry Description
A commercial on the cupcake shop Molly's Cupcakes in Downtown Naperville, IL.
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- 4/28 5:07 pm - What I Loved: Your shot composition is beautiful! Your moving shots were especially smooth and steady! I loved the shots of the cupcakes being prepared as well. The music you selected seemed to set the tone and mood for this bakery- it was upbeat and jazzy! Areas of Growth: I would love to see you incorporate either some text or interviews to set context in this project. What makes this cupcake shop special? What are some of the unique cupcakes offered? Right now you have b-roll set to music and I would love to see you take this to the next level with additional information! Since this is not a chain, it will be important to share this with your viewer since they may not be familiar.
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