This is an excerpt from the Varsity Boys' Basketball game, Lions vs Red Devils.
Positives: Your play-by-play announcer is talking a good amount for TV. And your analyst has talked to the players, which is great.
Improvements: Tough to tell off the top who is doing color and who is doing play-by-play. It would be better if the roles were defined and there was less talking over each other. The shot that ends at :37 pulls off the subject before the director cuts.
Positives: - Enthusiasm of the announcers was evident throughout; great job with the call! - Nice work utilizing multiple cameras for replays, cutaways, etc.
Improvements: - Remember that the live game is always the most important thing, so if you're going to try and work a replay in be careful that you're not stepping on top of live action (live the steal towards the end of this clip). - Game camera framing can be a little bit tighter - remember that most people are probably watching this on a small screen so get them a little closer to the action!
Positives: Good use of tight shots after the baskets. Like how the announcer brought up a conversation they had with a player - that shows the prep work that went into this broadcast. Good reference of the players brothers who play ball in college - again good prep work. Good use of replay.
Improvements: Continue to work on the camera work - the tight shots are hard, as you have to follow players and don't know when they are going to change direction on you.
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