Ember - ID# 135
Lyons Township
Commercial
Entry Description
This is a commercial for the Ember mug, an innovation in digital beverage temperature control.
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- 4/28 11:04 am - What I Loved: You picked a unique product to showcase in this commercial that I am sure a lot of people haven't heard of before. Since this isn't a well known brand, I am happy that you actually showed us the problem it's solving (cold winter coffee) and how it provides the solution. I literally searched this product on Amazon after watching! You did a great job aligning b-roll to your voice over. The color grading to a warm tone and music selected also reminded me of a relaxing morning that fit this product perfectly! Areas of Growth: This was a well done commercial, but I would have loved to have seen some moving shots! Think about how pans, tilts, etc., could have created a more engaging and dynamic look to this commercial.
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