This is a promo video for the broadcasting club, WMTH. Music: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L1Et2cdYaA4
Positives: great editing to the music soundtrack quick and to the point creates energy and desire to be part of the program
Improvements: a little more information on how to get involved
Positives: Good energy. The shot of the mixing board works very well. It's framed nicely and shows off some of your equipment. There were also some nice shots of the crew in action e.g. 0:02, 0:09, 0:23 and others.
Improvements: The editing is a little too frenetic. Use the quick cut technique and mix it with shots that last a few seconds. Consider exiting the overall length to 45 to 60 seconds. Try to collect a greater variety of shots and angles.
Positives: Good edits to the sound. I like how it is quick and grabs your attention.
Improvements: The ramp-up could have been more effective with the faders. Try to make some jump cuts with the music when the tripods are moving, it might help the video.
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