Phone Commercial - ID# 133
Neuqua Valley
Commercial
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Otterbox commercial
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/28 8:20 am - What I Loved: I love how you incorporated so many different sound effects to illustrate the phone movement. The bright colors and sounds combined well to fit the theme of being "bold." I loved the animated text for "new look" and how it moved in two different directions. Areas of Growth: The narrative was a little confusing for me as a viewer. I like how you said that "your life isn't a phone commercial." However, this DID seem more like a phone commercial rather than an otter box commercial. I think next time it might be more effective to show the phone actually breaking, rather than just on the ground. This would present a more clear need for the otter box!
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