Converse (Commercial) - ID# 156
Deerfield
Commercial
Entry Description
Converse is always in style. The girls in this commercial bring out the fun that Converse still stands for as a brand. Rights-Free Music: Hey! (Composer: Benjamin Tissot) (Bensound.com) Groovy Hip hop (Composer: Benjamin Tissot) (Bensound.com)
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/27 11:16 am - What I Loved: I like how you used all girls to highlight this brand of shoe, as well as a variety of activities (listening to music, cartwheels, skateboarding, dancing). The music was upbeat and engaging and seemed to fit the tone of the company and activities that you were showcasing. Areas of Growth: Without reading the description, it was hard to recognize what the commercial was for right off the bat. I would have loved to have seen a more variety of close ups of the shoes- many of the shots were very wide. In the ending dance sequence, for example, it would be great if you could show a close up of each girl's shoes while dancing while cutting to the beat.
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