The Conservatory - ID# 150
Homewood-Flossmoor
Commercial
Entry Description
An ad for a local Vintage and Vinyl shop
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/28 7:37 am - What I Loved: I love that you are highlighting a local business that also has a unique flare! The combination of mid century modern furniture and records was interesting to highlight. The music seemed to fit the tone of this store well. B-roll lined up to the a-roll script. Areas of Growth: When setting up your interview, I would zoom in on the interviewee a tiny bit; she seems a little small and has a bit too much headroom; I would also make sure she is looking to the right where the dead space in your frame is. The opening shot is a little shaky and some of the shots cut away too quickly. I wanted them to be held on screen a little more so that I could see the furniture design and record selection.
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