The Students' Nightmare - ID# 151
Morton East
Movie Trailer
Entry Description
The Students' Nightmare is a short film trailer about students trying to survive a toy attack. While the students are getting attacked they make an attempt to escape the building and make it out alive. Paid Lifetime Blanket License to Production Garden Music.
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 3/11 2:58 pm - Video Unavailable - only noticed it's viewable NOW by seeing teacher feedback here (I gave up trying to watch when I saw the warning in the thumbnail.)
- 2/25 2:58 pm - STORY: Where are the toys?? Your voiceover mentions the toys but doesn’t show the toys until 23 seconds. In a sense, you explained the plot of the story, but it seems very limited…like a joke that seemed funny but then didn’t have a lot of substance behind it. CAMERA: Camera shots were basic, mostly at eye level. Need more shot variety, compositions, angles, and movements. Study the rule of thirds. EDITING: The editing pace was fine, but the overall trailer didn’t lead to anything. It didn’t make me want to watch this movie. LIGHTING: No additional lighting was evident. Seemed like you just used whatever lighting was available in each location. AUDIO: The voice over sounded very flat and unemotional. The music was also too loud in the mix.
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