Excerpt of broadcast of Waubonsie Valley Football vs. Naperville Central
Positives: Strong energy on the big pass play. Your cut to the crowd was great. Nice shot and decision. I'd like to hear more crowd, too.
Improvements: One of the announcers is whispering, which is distracting because of how strongly the other announcer's voice is coming through. When you're not sure if there's a catch, watch the officials. See what they do. Also, I wish the score bug changed faster after the touchdown.
Positives: -Liked the enthusiasm from the announcers! - Great replays, the tight camera did a good job of following the ball.
Improvements: - For the announcers, when the down/distance is not shown on your scorebug, help the viewers out by saying it before every single play. In that aspect you should really be like a radio broadcast. Assume that your viewer has just turned in and doesn't know if it's 1st & 10 or 3rd & 27. - Game camera could consider zooming in slightly once a catch has been made along the far sideline to help the viewer see what's going on. Just slightly - but consider that your viewers are likely watching on a small screen.
Positives: Great energy from the announcers. Good tight shots. From where your cameras are at, are you able to get any tighter? Nice crowd reaction shot. Good use of replay for the TD.
Improvements: Could use more natural audio of the sounds in the stadium - we got a lot of the cow bell. Make sure the camera movements are steady - add some tension to the camera to help the movements be more steady. Watch so you don't have too much headroom on your camera shots.
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