Pizzaboy - ID# 161
Maine South
Commercial
Entry Description
A short commercial to promote the new sensation across the nation, PIZZABOY Chicago. Carlo Bertolli, owner of PIZZABOY, talks about his pizzeria and how it came to be. All That - Benjamin Tissot & Hip Jazz - Benjamin Tissot, Courtesy of Bensound.com
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Recent Teacher Comments
- 4/28 10:59 am - What I Loved: The shots of the food made me hungry! I love how you showed what is made at this restaurant beyond just pizzas. I loved the close up of the toppings being sprinkled on top of the pizza- this gave me a perspective I normally wouldn't see when eating or making pizza! The music you selected fit the tone of this project and kept me engaged. I like how you provided clear contact information at the ending frame that was designed and matched to the Pizzaboy logo. Areas of Growth: I love how your interviewee compared his restaurant to "Cheers!" This created a great image in my head of a friendly atmosphere at the restaurant. I would have loved to have seen additional shots of this. If you could film again, I would grab shots of your interviewee interacting with customers, people enjoying themselves at a table, etc. You have one shot of a pizza being handed off at :43 which is great, but I want to see more of this "family atmosphere" being described. Your interview shot has a lot dead space to the right of the screen. When conducting this interview, I would stand and ask questions to that your interviewee looks to the right and into this dead space. I would also raise your tripod a bit so as not to capture a low angle of your interviewee. Make sure your lens is at his eyeline. I also would have loved to have heard your interviewee mention the name of the establishment "Pizzaboy" within the first few seconds of the commercial.
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